We have been doing some diary writing in Room 14, Here are some of our stories.
Dear Diary
Oh my gosh, I think that yesterday was the worst day of my life because an enormous terrible tornado hit Palmerston North and it almost hit my house but lucky no one got hurt! My neighbour and I hid under my bed we all were so so scared! My neighbour's house got torn apart and it was so freaky when my neighbour's house was torn. So my neighbour's came over to my house.
By Lexus
Dear Diary
It has been such a scary day. Yesterday a tornado came to my house and it trashed it. I was so scared that I hid under the table and I stayed under the table for a minute. I came out from the table and I opened the door and it was gone. I was not scared any more.
By Anita
Yesterday a massive tornado came to Te Puke but thankfully it didn’t knock my house down. My whole street got ruined and it felt like Hell.
By Madison
DEAR DAIRY
On Wednesday in Napier and Hastings there was a big tornado at my neighbours house. They almost died. I was at my friend who lives in the city that the tornado was heading to.
Dear Diary
Yesterday was the scariest day of my life! A great big tornado hit Palmerston North. It nearly hit my house lucky it didn`t hit it. It was like the biggest tornado in the world and it crushed heaps of houses in Palmerston North.
By Hendrix
Dear Diary
Yesterday there was a terrible tornado. It blew my house away and all of my stuff up into the tornado. I was afraid of it. I ran down to my friends house. I told her what happened. Then we went back to my place and she said that is terrible.
By Casey
Dear Diary
Today has been a hard day. I am so lucky that I survived today. I had to hide in the long grass, with my mate Dan. After that we went back to our base. The last 4 days I had no food. My mate Dan got shot. I shot 4 Germens. I had survived the whole war. I was so happy when I got back. I was sad that my mate Dan got shot.
By Jaime.
Dear Diary
Today the governor has told the general to send the soldiers into battle.
By Jaelyn
Dear Diary
Today has been such a hard day. I was so scared hiding in the trenches but I had to be brave and shoot baddies. The baddies are trying to shoot the army team to get the stuff they need. Under the ground was a bomb that nobody knew was hidden. When we go to sleep we have a gun in case anyone steels from us.
I love reading your writing and seeing all the messages that you have to share. It looks like writing is fun and you are learning lots about how to write and what makes a good piece. I will hopefully be in soon for you to share some of your favourite pieces.
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